It was funny, and that's the point right? I think this shows how important the writing is in animations- spending all your time perfecting an animation for a boring script won't be very successful.
The music is awesome, and the animation style is fantastic. I really liked the rhythm of it all. There were some parts that were more interesting than others, but I watched it three times and I think this deserves to have a higher score.
The recording is really hurting you here, the buzzing just doesn't sound good. I'm sure if this was recorded without mistakes and a better mic, it would do much better. It has a good range of dynamics and there's something about the chords that I like.
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